Rough Cut

This is our Rough Cut of our work, as you can see from the length of this clip, it is 2 minutes and 31 seconds, however our final piece had to be a maximum of 2 minutes, therefore we had to cut and edit some scenes out which we thought were not so important. We had quickened some scenes up to take a couple seconds of. Also, from our final movie you will be able to see that some shots from the park have been cut out and edited such as when the victims father walks out of the park to go find his items which he had lost. We had cut this part out as this scene just added useless seconds which were of no use, therefore we had only included the shots we needed. We had also re-filmed the ending scene when the villain goes back to his dark room and writes on his weekly planner mission accomplished. We had taken This scene out and changed it as we had received feedback from the class and we were told that it seems as if our film finished after the kidnapping, therefore we had changed the scene to the villain showing a picture of his next victim. This made more sense as the audience would not have gotten confused, and also so it would have shown that the film has more to it.